Good god. If my company reviewed an apprehension I made that lacked 5 elements, I would loose my job. Typically MOST companies want LP to stop only when they have enough for a case.

True, some states allow detainment at concealment but your not
going to convince a jury that the person shoplifted. You kinda have to show intent / probable cause. A prosecutor is likely to dismiss charges liek this before they even make it to the docket.