A list of places to call....for what? Why did you need ID/birth certificate? For Who? Why do they need to see you?
What is "work on getting the BC"? Do you mean birth certificate? How does this jive with "since both have been taken care of"?
What rules did "the fiance" break? How is it that you have a mother-in-law but a fiance? Is this the fiance's mom? An ex's mom? Where is that ex?
I think there's a whole lot you are leaving out between all those commas....

