Firstly: Verisimilitude THAT is my $5 world of the day, thank you
Now for your questions...
Child's age I decided on would be 12, turning 13 while in care of the adult.
Mother is dead, father is non-existent/absent.
Main character NEVER contacts police, the National Center of Missing & Exploited Children (I THINK I named it right) or CYP/CYS or any other child services. Reason being, he knows where he screwed up with his children and sees this as an opportunity to redeem himself and his wife is deceased.
My idea was for the adult to going home from a bad night at work (still deciding between MMA Fighter & Wrestling, both are high paying but dangerous jobs that carry a lot of negative stigma and I also know a fair bit about them too, thinking MMA fighter as I'd like the character to start hitting a dry spot and be in danger of losing his job because of poor performance, have you seen anyone more than X-5-X in MMA not named Frank/Ken Shamrock or Chuck Lidell (SP?)?
If there's any other information I can give up to help you with helping make this story more truthful, PLEASE let me know at your soonest convenience
