My question involves a traffic ticket from the state of: violating CVC 22349(b).
Here is my rough draft of my trial by written declaration. Please if you can read it over and give me some tips on what I should change, add, eliminate, etc. I was found not guilty for a speeding ticket CVC 22350 in April of 2012. This is a rough draft so it isn't too great and I'd like to add a little more to the end. Thank you


"I respectfully submit this written declaration to the Sonoma County Superior Court pursuant to the CVC 40902. I hereby plead not guilty to the charge of violating CVC 22349(b).

Here are the facts of my case: While driving Southbound behind two other cars on Stony Point Road South of Jewett Road in Petaluma, CA on the date of January 22, 2013, I was stopped by California Highway Patrol officer Alan Zang (I.D. #*****). I was charged with CVC 22349(b). Officer Zang was traveling Northbound behind two other cars. As I passed his patrol vehicle, Officer Zang made a dangerous U-turn across the double yellow boundary to stop my vehicle. Officer Zang stated I was traveling 70 MPH in a 55 MPH maximum speed zone but refused to present any proof after I asked on multiple occasions. This can lead to a result that the detected speed came from another vehicle traveling in front of me; as radar can be very inaccurate while traveling with the flow of traffic in the other direction. At the time of my stop, the present weather conditions were sunny and clear. Visibility conditions were also clear. The traffic conditions were moderate.

Furthermore, I believe that the officer's detected speed from his radar device came from another vehicle after I made a discovery request for the officer's notes, radar calibration logs, and radar evidence of my speed following my traffic ticket. On March 15th, I mailed a discovery request. The certified mail receipt indicates that the letter was delivered March 18th."