I think you've got most of it pretty well covered. Failing to verify the "patrol" speed with the car's speedometer is a biggy. Failing to indicate the tuning fork test or the give the serial numbers of the forks is also huge.
If you subpoena the officer, however, you will most likely lose. He will neatly tie up all of the loose ends, and you will be left with no defense, since his sworn statement will NOT be the evidence against you -- the officer's testimony will, and he'll simply provide all those missing details verbally.
Barry

